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I need ideas for a sex scene....

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Writer's Block . . . I've set up camp. I began a short erotica piece a few weeks ago (Right now it's just under 8K). It was meant to be the first of many during the summer but I'm quite stuck.

The problem is that I need a sex scene dynamic that involves something different / unique / extreme . . . something that my other characters in all my other stories perhaps haven't experienced. I'm a wash for ideas.

Gist of the story: A woman seduces a pianist at a club which is in the lobby of a posh hotel in Chicago. The first scene takes place at the piano (during the day, so the club isn't open to the public yet). The second takes place later in the evening, just after he finished performing - they hook up just off-stage . . .

And the third (and final) sex scene? I was thinking of having it take place in her hotel suite.

I'm at a loss.

I always explore emotional / psychological desires and urges . . . and sex wise I've written a lot of stories with big insertions / big cocks / fisting / masochism / spanking . . . and for some reason none of those really make me go 'yes, that's what this story needs!'.

So what does this story need? She ultimately tells him that there's something she wants to do that she doesn't have the courage to do on her own. She wants him to help with the experience. She gets his okay before she tells him what it is . . .and this is between all manner of cock sucking and fingering and what have you.

So, I need help . . . I need out-there, out of the box, crazy creative, unique and possibly freakish or jaw-dropping ideas.
Certified Mind Reader
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It turns out that he's an evil-twin who is the ghost of an alien on a mission to Earth to steal all of its tin foil (because no more tin-foil = no more tin-foil hats = no more defense against the alien's mind control rays). Also, it turns out she's a psychic, and has been reverse-mind-controlling the evil twin the whole time. And that's when Ben Franklin shows up with Jimi Hendrix in a time machine.... seriously, this thing basically writes itself.

Post-avant-retro-demelodicized-electro-yodel-core is my jam.

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It turns out that he's an evil-twin who is the ghost of an alien on a mission to Earth to steal all of its tin foil (because no more tin-foil = no more tin-foil hats = no more defense against the alien's mind control rays). Also, it turns out she's a psychic, and has been reverse-mind-controlling the evil twin the whole time. And that's when Ben Franklin shows up with Jimi Hendrix in a time machine.... seriously, this thing basically writes itself.


Not sure how this meets her need for a sex scene but if you write this and post it over on the blue site, I'll read it. Gonzo s-f adventures are a genre niche I enjoy from time to time.
Big-haired Bitch
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Titties.

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Troublemaker
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not sure if this is within Lush rules but can you bring in the piano...such as tied with piano wire, piano legs, banged on piano in public, tied to piano stool and shared with room service/maids, tied to piano stool and left on elevator for a stranger's use? getting fucked by assorted piano parts...the guy pries off a piano key or 3? something linked to music or a specific song theme? or use the pianist's connections with the hotel to take advantage of everything the hotel offers....pimped out by bellboy, a strange dalliance in the hotel kitchen there are endless possibilities of implements/foods, the spa, wild sex on the roof, sex in the window, some weird kink related to hotels (luggage fetish, she shines shoes while getting banged from behind, steals another woman's shoes...)
Maybe google pics of a bunch of high-end hotels and see what catches your imagination...
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not sure if this is within Lush rules but can you bring in the piano...such as tied with piano wire, piano legs, banged on piano in public, tied to piano stool and shared with room service/maids, tied to piano stool and left on elevator for a stranger's use? getting fucked by assorted piano parts...the guy pries off a piano key or 3? something linked to music or a specific song theme? or use the pianist's connections with the hotel to take advantage of everything the hotel offers....pimped out by bellboy, a strange dalliance in the hotel kitchen there are endless possibilities of implements/foods, the spa, wild sex on the roof, sex in the window, some weird kink related to hotels (luggage fetish, she shines shoes while getting banged from behind, steals another woman's shoes...)
Maybe google pics of a bunch of high-end hotels and see what catches your imagination...


and you could call the story Highly Strung and Stylishly Hung...

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Constant Gardener
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If this takes place at The Palmer House, you can somehow work in how their suite carpet feels like you're walking atop six inches of furry wall (Get Him To The Greek)...

Might have to toss in some psychedelic mushrooms or Jeffrey. But you definitely need to reveal how she wants to have sex with the pianist atop or near her Casio portable MZ-X electronic keyboard workstation.

Maybe work in a room service call where the pianist has invited another man into their adult fun so it's a hawt M/F/M fuckfest while she's melting into the six inch deep carpeting.

At this point I'm just throwing shit against the wall, hoping something sticks.
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Certified Mind Reader
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Not sure how this meets her need for a sex scene but if you write this and post it over on the blue site, I'll read it. Gonzo s-f adventures are a genre niche I enjoy from time to time.



The time machine is sex powered... obviously...

Post-avant-retro-demelodicized-electro-yodel-core is my jam.

Certified Mind Reader
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Titties.


Pretty much the solution to all problems.

Post-avant-retro-demelodicized-electro-yodel-core is my jam.

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She could ask him to have sex as they dangled outside her hotel window (or off her balcony) on a rope – naked and in full view of people down on the street . . . maybe from about the 8th or 10th floor . . . high enough to be extremely dangerous, but low enough for everyone to be able to see (and hear?) exactly what they are doing.
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Titties.


ditto

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Sex on the piano? Titties and piano wire? Sucking his cock while he plays the piano? And maybe have him playing a piece where he can use his feet every so often to play with her titties? I don't know. Grew up with a grand piano in the parlour and and I'm thinking that the opportunities to throw it out of tune in a truly enjoyable way are innumerable.
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She could ask him to have sex as they dangled outside her hotel window (or off her balcony) on a rope – naked and in full view of people down on the street . . . maybe from about the 8th or 10th floor . . . high enough to be extremely dangerous, but low enough for everyone to be able to see (and hear?) exactly what they are doing.


Is it a bird? Is it a plane?... No it's... Thelonious Monk!

And when he cums he can shout "Look out below!!"


Yes, all my ideas are terrible.

Post-avant-retro-demelodicized-electro-yodel-core is my jam.

Gravelly-Voiced Fucker
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Someone has to get the Tentacle Sex ball rolling. What better than now? You can use Lush 4D to publish it in 2021, when the Tentacle Sex category is created.
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Someone has to get the Tentacle Sex ball rolling. What better than now? You can use Lush 4D to publish it in 2021, when the Tentacle Sex category is created.


I've seen (studied, art school*) the tentacle porn before and many of the more "nuanced" Japanese porn. Actually, analyzed Japanese porn for a paper in college. It's quite fascinating when you understand why the creators went off on the tangents they did. Their hands were tied by the law but they saw a demand for fucking (dick in pussy) porn. So all that weird shit you see was imagined to circumvent the odd laws like, you can't show an actual penis... well, a tentacle isn't a penis so there you go, a tentacle isn't a penis so LEGAL. They were like pervy Japanese Al Capones.

That said.... The tentacle porn had an added and obvious value (sorry, not value.... troll) that was meant to fuck with the Japanese obscenity laws. It was put in there to say like, change the law faster than we can draw this shit, BITCH.

That said.... For those who don't get this... and actually get off on the tentacle porn... You're getting off on an obvious beastiality scenario. May that lay heavy on your conscience and soul.
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You can do a lot with food sex. Start with some warm gravy on her titties and just see where it all leads.
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You can do a lot with food sex. Start with some warm gravy on her titties and just see where it all leads.


Gravy on tits, dag? I know you southerners take your gravy piping hot. Don't lead the lush populace astray buz.
Gentleman Stranger
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He performs for an audience as his profession - now she wants to perform, to put on a voyeuristic sexual symphony in front of an appreciative audience. Perhaps a bawy bagatelle of balls and butts or a more involved carnal concerto of cocks and cunts. (Ignore the alliteration; it's late, and I'm tired...)
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Here is a couple serious ones that I know for sure are erotic, kinky, and have brought on mind blowing orgasms for me.

1. Have them fucking, not making love, in front of a big picture window with another wing of the hotel across about a 20 to 40 foot space between the two wings.

2. Make it a threesome with either another woman or man.

3. If it involves another lover/s like a third or a fourth up to a gang bang let the piano player go to the other wing and watch from a distance.

4. A heavy BDSM scene. She could have been curious and finds out she has the best orgasms of her life. She could discover multiple orgasms and squirting.

5. What she is curious about is being a high class hooker. So he gets her to dress like a slut and takes her across the street to a swinger's club where he chooses a few guys (Johns) to service. There would be no money involved so it is totally legal. She can experience the sensations of being a high class hooker and him her pimp. Afterwards they can fuck their brains out.

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Gravy on tits, dag? I know you southerners take your gravy piping hot. Don't lead the lush populace astray buz.


I'm out to convert the entire site. Nothing like motorboating a big pair of hot gravy covered tits. I'll just bet you're a little intrigued. Of course, if you're wearing glasses, you'll have to take the specs off.
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I'm out to convert the entire site. Nothing like motorboating a big pair of hot gravy covered tits. I'll just bet you're a little intrigued. Of course, if you're wearing glasses, you'll have to take the specs off.


Well then, lets just have the men dip their willies in a bowl of mashed potatoes while we're at it, lol. Give a whole new meaning to bangers and mash, no?
And as imagination bodies forth
The forms of things unknown, the poet’s pen
Turns them to shapes and gives to airy nothing
A local habitation and a name.
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Well then, lets just have the men dip their willies in a bowl of mashed potatoes while we're at it, lol. Give a whole new meaning to bangers and mash, no?


Bravo!!!!
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