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Advent's Debut

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Rookie Scribe
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Hello everyone.
I am AdventSaint,
And I am hoping to make some friends here.
I shall have my debut as a poem.


Hark! Dost thou hear?
Veiled in the night,
Lurks mine greatest fear.

Lonliness in the dark.
That is what haunts mine heart.


Feel free to criticize, constructively ofcourse. This poem is unnamed, and made up within the past 10min, and it is a true fear of mine.
Lurker
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Welcome

I think you did beautifully.

It's the worst feeling in the world if you are drowning in it.
Rookie Scribe
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Thank you. And yes, it is.
In-House Sapiosexual
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Welcome to Lush.
Introduction by a poem on your own thread?
I think that you will do just fine here. {}

~ABG
? A True Story ?