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I think it would be kind of interesting if you could do poems in every category. Instead of just leaving it to love poems.

Do you think that might happen someday?

Any thoughts?
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I think it would be kind of interesting if you could do poems in every category. Instead of just leaving it to love poems.

Do you think that might happen someday?

Any thoughts?



as it stands you can write poems in any category you wish, as long as they have an erotic or love theme to them - that said, they still will be placed under love poems - i think, if we're being honest here, the majority of the people read to be aroused and are looking for stories - separating the two allows them to get what they want as well as for people like you to easily find poems if that is what you prefer. seriously, do we really want to double the front page chapter list by adding poem to the end of each category as well?

You can’t truly call yourself peaceful unless you are capable of violence. If you’re not capable of violence, you’re not peaceful. You’re harmless.

Matriarch
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Poetry is the only category in which we remove the minimum length requirement. Merging the lot with every other category, would make that impossible.

This is a sex story site primarily, hence the domain name. We do also love reading poetry, which is why that category exists.

We're happy with how it is currently, but thank you for your suggestion.
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I think it would be kind of interesting if you could do poems in every category. Instead of just leaving it to love poems.



You can write a poem in any category you want, it does not have to be a traditional "love poem" so to speak...you can always add the specific categories in the tags...

For example...let's say you submitted this classic...

Ode To My Sister

My favorite family member is my sister,
And she really is so dear,
She keeps her butt hole clean and bleached,
And she lets me do her in the rear.

She keeps cucumbers in the fridge,
Though she's never made a salad,
She always buys fresh ginger too,
Though her cooking skills aren't valid.

She invites the neighbors over at night,
And we take turns passing her around,
When she goes back in her room alone,
We hear a buzzing sound.

See...you could post a classic poem like that in the "Love Poem" category, and just add the rest in the tags, which might read something like "incest, sister, group sex, toys, ginger, figging, anal sex, anal bleaching, whatever"...

Understand how it works?


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I understand now. Thanks.
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You can write a poem in any category you want, it does not have to be a traditional "love poem" so to speak...you can always add the specific categories in the tags...

For example...let's say you submitted this classic...

Ode To My Sister

My favorite family member is my sister,
And she really is so dear,
She keeps her butt hole clean and bleached,
And she lets me do her in the rear.

She keeps cucumbers in the fridge,
Though she's never made a salad,
She always buys fresh ginger too,
Though her cooking skills aren't valid.

She invites the neighbors over at night,
And we take turns passing her around,
When she goes back in her room alone,
We hear a buzzing sound.

See...you could post a classic poem like that in the "Love Poem" category, and just add the rest in the tags, which might read something like "incest, sister, group sex, toys, ginger, figging, anal sex, anal bleaching, whatever"...

Understand how it works?



how come you haven't submitted this, Alan? seriously, it's way better then umm... your... i mean, some stuff i read... (for those who don't know it, DM is actually a well regarded published author of poetry, and we're sort of proud of him, even tho some of us will never admit it - oh, and he has a book out. i've heard it's good). smile

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how come you haven't submitted this, Alan? seriously, it's way better then umm... your... i mean, some stuff i read... (for those who don't know it, DM is actually a well regarded published author of poetry, and we're sort of proud of him, even tho some of us will never admit it - oh, and he has a book out. i've heard it's good). smile


It is very funny (incest aside) but as far as I was aware, incest wasn't allowed in the poetry category, nor in the forums (sorry, DM, I love you loads). Has this changed now?

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I agree...poetry in all genres
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It seems though when you write erotic poems they say it doesn't fit in the love poems category. Then you write a love poem and they say not enough erotica.

I like poetry like how dirty martini writes it. Funny and erotic.

But that doesn't seem to pass through anymore.

I know I tend to write two line poetry and some goes through but a lot they say belongs in the poetry corner.

Some moderators approve them others don't like that style of poetry. Even though they are erotic poems.
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It seems though when you write erotic poems they say it doesn't fit in the love poems category. Then you write a love poem and they say not enough erotica.

I like poetry like how dirty martini writes it. Funny and erotic.

But that doesn't seem to pass through anymore.

I know I tend to write two line poetry and some goes through but a lot they say belongs in the poetry corner.

Some moderators approve them others don't like that style of poetry. Even though they are erotic poems.



The title, "Love Poems" began that way, but has has grown to include all sorts. It's a liquorice category.

A poem's "quality" can rely on many things. Yes, sometimes it does depend on the moderator who happens to read that piece being able to recognise it as a finely crafted poem. But it also relies on it being just that. As authors, we believe that most, if not all, of what we do is fine showcase stuff. But the crowds will usually tell us differently, particularly when it is submitted to a place where the pieces must meet certain qualities and merits to pass muster. That's the price of entering somebody else's arena, rather than creating our own.

An author may write a poem that is screamingly funny and have it passed, but it might also be rejected for being utterly ridiculous. It all depends on how the piece comes across. I have one that I thought was utterly ridiculous, but I sent it in anyway. I got more messages over how erotic people thought that was than any other poem I have written.

Likewise, a serious piece can seem dark, ugly and not erotic at all. A moderator will look for "flavour", the atmosphere of the piece. Much of my poetry is what I glibly term depressing, but it speaks (I hope) of sexual tension, longing and desire. Perhaps it does not belong here. Some of it is raw, powerful and intense from this writer's point of view, or silly and trite, but fun. But at some point, somebody has agreed that it does belong. I tailor what I write for this site, or put it elsewhere (Facebook or Storiesspace.com).

I can "knock out poetry easily", because it is a natural way for me to write. But it takes energy, intensity, emotion and focus to do it. If a reader is faced with a two-sentence poem, it had better be ground-breaking stuff to pass muster. I don't doubt that most people, given enough time and energy, could do such a thing, but it is highly unlikely.

If you want to question a moderator's decision, then take it up with them. Or, use the Poetry Corner as directed, and save the publication for your more expanded work that people can savour and mull over. Quality is not always the overriding factor on quantity. The two need to go hand-in-hand, usually.

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I just mean that my poetry rhymes in two lines. I set up a whole story. It is always erotic.

Some moderators like that way others do not.

The people that read my work seem to like that style as well.

I am not that deep of a person to do some of the harder types of poetry.

I am not a writer by trade. It's purely a hobby.
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I just mean that my poetry rhymes in two lines. I set up a whole story. It is always erotic.

Some moderators like that way others do not.

The people that read my work seem to like that style as well.

I am not that deep of a person to do some of the harder types of poetry.

I am not a writer by trade. It's purely a hobby.



I do it for fun as well. Some rhyme, some don't. As I said, if you have issue with a moderator's decision, ask them about it, or send a message to one you trust and talk it over, if you think it depends who you get.

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The moderators are all very helpful. Some are very patient and kind and will offer suggestions on how to get them to the front page.

I appreciate everything the moderators do they are ALL outstanding people.

Thanks to everybody who left comments on this topic. I am learning and hope to get better and better with what I publish here.
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The moderators are all very helpful. Some are very patient and kind and will offer suggestions on how to get them to the front page.

I appreciate everything the moderators do they are ALL outstanding people.

Thanks to everybody who left comments on this topic. I am learning and hope to get better and better with what I publish here.


What a lovely thing to say... Thank You!

I should mention that Lush Stories Moderators are VERY carefully vetted before being asked to contribute. Most, (but not all) are extremely accomplished writers. ALL have demonstrated an innate understanding of the ethos of the site and it's operation. An ESSENTIAL attribute for all moderators is an ability to communicate kindly, helpfully and diplomatically with submitting writers. MANY submissions are discussed and debated upon the Mods Forum section of the site. Opinions are offered and indeed sought.

Submitting writers are valued most highly, and moderators understand that it is the submissions of writers that is the life blood of the site.

Without writers, we have no site.

That said, experienced moderators KNOW what works and what doesn't. A moderator will NOT post questionable work for public scrutiny for TWO reasons. ONE, the work, for whatever reason, may not satisfy our quality standards. TWO, we need to be EXTREMELY protective of our writers. (Lush, in general, is a very polite, supportive and friendly site BUT like all internet sites, not every member is respectful and mannerly...) Experience teaches Lush Moderators what will and will not 'work' upon site. We will NOT post work that we feel will encourage hurtful and negative comment by the wider readership.

What we will do is to gently explain WHY a particular piece isn't suitable for public posting and offer advice as to how it might be improved. In this way, Lush Stories avoids a lot of the venality, trolling and general nastiness that is so common on other less-well policed sites.

Lush Moderators work for both the site, our writers (and of course our readers.) In my opinion, this is the same thing. We take the responsibility VERY seriously.

(As I stated, most Lush Mods are themselves writers who came here just as you and I did... They KNOW what it's like to submit a piece. They KNOW how precious the work is to those who write it, they KNOW how much energy and emotion and indeed BRAVERY it takes for a writer to 'go public', as it were...)

And they do their best.

xx Stephanie (Senior Moderator, Lush Stories.)
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It is very funny (incest aside) but as far as I was aware, incest wasn't allowed in the poetry category, nor in the forums (sorry, DM, I love you loads). Has this changed now?



What do you mean incest isn't allowed in the poetry category? Why, some of the most classic poems in that category are all about incest, and just like the stories on this here fine site, they get more views than everything else combined...

Why, I'll have you know that the most viewed poem on this fine site known throughout the world as Lush Stories is called "Incest Is Best"...here, I'll make it easy for you to find...

Incest Is Best
http://www.lushstories.com/stories/love-poems/incest-is-best.aspx

And thanks for the kind words there Royal Rachel, though I know you just like that poem I posted here because it mentions ginger...maybe I will submit it...if you give it a Recommended Read...

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What do you mean incest isn't allowed in the poetry category? Why, some of the most classic poems in that category are all about incest, and just like the stories on this here fine site, they get more views than everything else combined...

Why, I'll have you know that the most viewed poem on this fine site known throughout the world as Lush Stories is called "Incest Is Best"...here, I'll make it easy for you to find...

Incest Is Best
http://www.lushstories.com/stories/love-poems/incest-is-best.aspx

And thanks for the kind words there Royal Rachel, though I know you just like that poem I posted here because it mentions ginger...maybe I will submit it...if you give it a Recommended Read...


That may be the case, DM, but during the time that I was mod, poems that were outrightly incest weren't allowed. This was for various reasons which are not what this thread is about, but the biggest reason, as I recall, was so that people had the choice whether or not to read incest material. There is a category specifically for that.

It may be that the current mods didn't think my questioning worth answering, or overlooked it, but I would like an answer to that question regarding the poetry focus.

Lush did publish certain things at one time, but with growth and changing needs, other things were or were not allowed, and are constantly under review, even now.

This issue is very black and white to me. Either it is allowed or it isn't, whatever the skill of the author. That's all I want to know.

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Daisy, currently we allow incest poems as long as they at tagged with an incest tag warning readers that there is incesty stuff in them - sorry, i missed that bit in your previous posts. smile

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Lush did publish certain things at one time, but with growth and changing needs, other things were or were not allowed, and are constantly under review, even now.



At the time my incest poem posted on the site in 2009, it was a non-issue...I don't think that whole incest in the forum ban was around yet...but, quite a few things have changed here on Lush in the four years I've been here...and mostly all for the better btw...

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Daisy, currently we allow incest poems as long as they at tagged with an incest tag warning readers that there is incesty stuff in them - sorry, i missed that bit in your previous posts. smile


Thank you for your reply.
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In consideration,

how can you know me without touching my soul?

Comprehension of words I have scrolled.

Foretold by Graces and Muses, mythology past tense.

Don't be blinded by what you think you can see,

for this is the only side of me.

Transpired by philosophy and deep in thought.

Feeling the person I am, within my embodiment

on the creators mesa...where tumble weeds grow.

Marked by oasis...and forever springs flow.

~

Born of an earth mother from the deep south...

the land of red clay and sculptor's marble about.

Raised on gifts from the fertile soil, my parents toiled.

There I became the carrier of words that I be...

in search of other travelers of my beneficiary.

~

The quill the right side of my minds destiny...

of Adagio-Sabadicus sensuality.

Stepping stones to pleasantries.

Personification of a mythical spirit poet,

eternally sailing the universal sea...

guiding mist leading me.

Sanity is my gift, I will pass to thee.

~

The dreamer's side of my mortality,

from my mind's veracity.

Infinite powers that be, given me poetry.

Stroll through this terraqueous globe with me.

The inkwell a decanter...essence inebriation.

Intoxicating the spirits of the bard's abode.

Eros dust I soft touch...

heavenly elixirs sweet ambrosia.

~

Writing is breathing from inside my flesh.

On my scrolls, minuet's and lovers dance...

beneath the chandeliers of sparkling stars.

Etching fascinations and erotic incantations,

upon the canvas...my medium's parchment.

Me, The Wanderer...words my caviar.

In generosities I am charmed.

In consideration, I may be my best client.

How can you know me without touching my soul?

Comprehension of words I have scrolled.

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Looking for poontang in a hurricane,

on Interstate 65...

at a cheap hotel in Dixie.

Rheumatism predicting rain.

Needin' Novocain to relieve the pain,

my cock was hard as sugar cane.

Just north of Mobile,

four hours from Tupelo.

~

I called down to the front desk,

to see if they could suggest.

Asking for a gal with an endowed chest,

they sent me Alice from Bucharest.

Alice ask me how I would like it...

and I told her she ought to know.

Then she took my cash,

and the winds began to blow.

~

Entering her shapely derriere,

she began to squirm...

as I received a phone call,

my wife in Delaware.

My wife wanted to remind me

to take out the trash...

left over corn and lima beans,

a dish called Succotash.

~

Looking for poontang is insane,

when you're looking for it in a hurricane...

but I had Doppler Radar in a Jaguar,

driving down Interstate 65 in my cah.

Just north of Mobile,

four hours from Tupelo...

across the Tallahatchie Bridge.










































































Looking for poontang in a hurricane,

on Interstate 65...

at a cheap hotel in Dixie.

Rheumatism predicting rain.

Needin' Novocain to relieve the pain,

my cock was hard as sugar cane.

Just north of Mobile,

four hours from Tupelo.

~

I called down to the front desk,

to see if they could suggest.

Asking for a gal with an endowed chest,

they sent me Alice from Bucharest.

Alice ask me how I would like it...

and I told her she ought to know.

Then she took my cash,

and the winds began to blow.

~

Entering her shapely derriere,

she began to squirm...

as I received a phone call,

my wife in Delaware.

My wife wanted to remind me

to take out the trash...

left over corn and lima beans,

a dish called Succotash.

~

Looking for poontang is insane,

when you're looking for it in a hurricane...

but I had Doppler Radar in a Jaguar,

driving down Interstate 65 in my cah.

Just north of Mobile,

four hours from Tupelo...

across the Tallahatchie Bridge.


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I picked up my quill,

dip it in the well

and started to write.

I was heartbroken...

taking a sip of rum,

and chocking back thoughts.

~

...it was an arraignment

cosigned by our leaders...

...they didn't even explain

~

I heard the wind howl

and felt a stiff freeze.

A good case of nerves

I felt shivers to my flesh.

Frost formed on my quill.

~

...she was pregnant

and we were in love...

...they wouldn't hear of it

~

I poured more rum

forgetting all inebriations

and continued to scribe.

From my chilling quite quarters...

the ink running over,

and tears cascading down my face.

~

...her broken body was discovered

at the bottom of a ravine...

in her hand my picture...

~

At my window was a wizen owl

peering in at my mortal soul.

Putting down my pen I re-read

her last letter...

and kissed her mental image.

~

"because we are different in nations

would you join me in spirit"

~

The owl winked at me, and hooed

from the frozen pane of glass.

It flew away toward the ravine

as silence fell in my chest.

For it wouldn't be,

but a moment.

We would be together again.

The owl looked backed...

and smiled.





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To the Navajo people the owl is the symbol of impending death.
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Is this salvageable


As you lay naked on your back and laugh,

I paint your nipples and breasts.

With a soft hair brush, I brush.

Covering with powdered sugar water and cinnamon

they glaze like erotic pastry.

What a rush.
~
Like leading me there you sway your hips

as the bristles sweep neatly enticing me.

Tracing your curves.

You whisper sensually in my ear.

I grin.
~
I add nutmeg on your thighs.

Giving rise to my cock.

The woman dew on your pussy like icing

intoxicates me.

You sigh.
~
Precum seeping down my penis.

Then I suckled upon your tits,

picnicking as if the gifts they are.

Running my fingers through your red hair,

green eyes staring at me

you raise your ass.

Your cunt demitasse.

I Throb.
~
Your long fingers reaching out

grabbing my testicles,

you screaming.

"Fuck me, Adagio."
~
Magnificent fornication.
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My rejected poem..

ONLY YOU

Only You can put a smile upon my face 
when I'm held in your arms loving embrace

Only You can make my heart swell 
and you never fail to ring my bell

Only You are loving, sweet and kind 
and your face is etched in my mind

Only You can make my darkness go away
with your kinds words you tell me everyday

Only You make all my gray clouds blue
you really are my dream that came true

Only You give me butterflies in my belly
and make my legs so weak like jelly

Only You can take an ordinary day 
and make it special in every single way

Only You can make every love song I listen to 
have my mind wander with thoughts of you 

Only You didn't arrive on a white horse
those are only in fairy tales, of course

Only You put my heart at ease 
when you came subtle as a breeze

Only You are my gentleman with Southern charm
and so much hotter than any five-alarm

Only You can make me laugh so hard I pee
and you always let me just be me

Only You excite me when your hand explores my breast
I can actually feel my heart beating right out of my chest

Only You make all my girly parts giggle
when your cock does that little wiggle

Only You have a tongue that doesn't quit
as it explores every inch of my pink clit

Only You can make me cum so hard I shiver
and babe you never ever fail to deliver

Only You taste delicious and oh so sweet 
your cream in my mouth is a welcomed treat

Only You brought happiness to my life
I'm so honored to be called your wife.
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Unfortunately, no two editors are alike. Often, I'm convinced it's a flip of the coin. There is nothing in your poem to keep it from being published.
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Unfortunately, no two editors are alike. Often, I'm convinced it's a flip of the coin. There is nothing in your poem to keep it from being published.


Thanks for your two cents.

I really thought it was worthy of lush standards. Some of the poems that have been published recently have me scratching my hand and saying wtf.
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I don't understand "what worthy of Lush standards mesns;" that's sort of hypocrisy...DUH.
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1. If you guys wish to post your poetry without it going through the story verification process, there's a designated area of the site for that: http://www.lushstories.com/forum/yaf_postst469p12_Put-one-of-yours-here.aspx


2. Lush has standards...either your poems meet those standards or they don't. There's neither hypocrisy nor controversy/conspiracy there.

3. If your submissions are rejected (especially after multiple times) there are reasons. Reasons you're made aware of and often in great detail by the moderator(s) who approves/rejects your work, which brings me to my next point...

4. Either heed these reasons and make the necessary changes (seek help, if needed), or don't look forward to your submission being published. It's quite simple.


This is how the process works. It's how it's always worked. That's why hundreds of stories/poems can be published on a monthly basis. Insinuating otherwise is just an insult to the people who volunteer their time to make what you do happen as easily and as smoothly as possible. Do you think story moderators take pleasure in rejecting work and having to read it several times until it passes muster? No...but there is always someone willing to do exactly that. You do yourself a disservice by blaming those who are only here to help.

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Or you could put one of yours here.

I've posted there over time, when I don't feel like being lovey dovey.
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ya ... someday! hoping for that ;)