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Her Royal Spriteness
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this isn't very good. i didn't spend very much time on it. i needed to write it, though. it doesn't really have a place on the front page, it's not a Love Poem, just some random thoughts. thank you DD for inspiration. i hope i can repay you some day.


If you’d asked to kiss me I might have said yes
Gotten past the peanuts and the curry on your breath
Maybe made an exception for the scratchiness of your beard
If you’d only asked

If you’d asked to buy me a drink I might have thought it over
Although I might have spent the evening talking about my lover
But maybe we could have been friends, one can never know
If you’d only asked

If you’d asked to walk with me I might have said all right
I’d parked out behind the bank again, under the only working light
And after all, it was very late, and there are monsters in the night
If you’d only asked

I am super girl (I’m going to have it tattooed on my wrist
Or perhaps across my fingers, so that when I make twin fists
There will be no doubt at all about who or what I am)
I am super girl and I can do anything.

You can’t truly call yourself peaceful unless you are capable of violence. If you’re not capable of violence, you’re not peaceful. You’re harmless.

Internet Philosopher
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Its beautiful. You should post this on Stories Space. smile
Active Ink Slinger
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What he said. smile

I love poems that make you see, feel, smell and taste.
Alpha Blonde
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You inspire me all the time, and this is no exception.
Even without trying, you weave words with effortless magic.
You have a gift that no one can ever come close to touching. Always remember that.
We all love you and hope to hear your *giggles* again soon.
You are, and always will be, the best kind of Supergirl.
XO
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that was really good. loved reading it and i hope you can do many more like that.