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Recently, I noticed that none of the high scoring stories I've read (and written) ever seemed to make it to the Top Ten Stories list.
So, I went through all the ones that DID make it to see what made them so good.

9 OUT OF 10 ON THE TOP TEN STORIES LIST WERE POEMS!

This doesn't seem fair. Sure, some of the poems were pretty good, but by and large they weren't erotic. Romantic, yes. Sometimes.

If we're gonna give lists of the 10 best stories of the month, I think we should limit the list to "stories". Have a separate best 10 list for poems.

Does anyone else have an opinion on this?
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Alpha Blonde
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Yes, I absolutely agree. I mentioned something similar in the feedback section.
Having two separate lists seems fair to both the story writers and the poets on this site.
I often peruse that list looking for the hot stories of the month, but they are few and far between when the scores that poems get often dominate the Top Picks.
Artistic Tart
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I strongly agree with this.

The poems are a completely different ballgame, and as long as they are together, they are over-represented on the front page in my opinion.
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I strongly agree with this.

The poems are a completely different ballgame, and as long as they are together, they are over-represented on the front page in my opinion.


So basicaly what you are saying is that Love Poems, Love Stories and Incest Stories have nothing in common here on this site?

I think they do, and there is a reason why all those three categories are represented here. I do feel bad for all of you who are fed up with love poems (how they are overly represented) but I think it is just this period of time when people are a bit more emotional and reading more poetry before spring time. Don't worry, time will come soon back to the wanking and when we will discuss about incest, relutance and BDSM and why are they so overly represented.

I, personaly have to say Thank you to Lush, for allowing me to write in foregin language. It is great way to express myselfe and liberate in the same time, but I would glady give away my spot in Story Picks for one of your erotic or love stories Lady X
Artistic Tart
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Maybe you misunderstood, She. Nobody's saying to do away with the poems.
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This is in the wrong forum. I'm moving it to the site feedback forum. This Topic has been DONE to death.
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This Topic has been DONE to death.


It was discussed in this same thread in August, but I can't find where anything was really resolved, nor have I seen it discussed since (assuming it's in the right category, which granted this one wasn't LOL).
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Maybe you misunderstood, She. Nobody's saying to do away with the poems.


Nope, I didn't misunderstood, and I didn't suggest or assume that should that resolution be done. I was just offering one of mine for yours
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Yes, Xuani...I agree with you that it wasn't addressed but it doesn't make sense to separate these. If people don't like the poetry they can remove that category from their Lush front view. I find the poetry section to be better written(in most cases). It's easier and quicker to write a poem than a full on story but why should the poets be discriminated against. I find a lot of the stories are 'samey' using the same plot and character types. We might be an erotic story site but we have evolved to much more than that with the social aspect,the awesome forum and the emergence of really great writers and poets.
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Buddy bear, the story picks for February have 6 stories and 4 poems.So before you start making up figures can you get your facts straight.

The Clicking Tease Is On Her Knees -poem
I will feel at home -poem
Refuse To Believe -- Making Peace With the Past -poem
Lost in Conversation -story
Days of Leisure III: Benny and Carla -story
Valentine's Day Love -story
My Emerald Universe -story
Fantasy Fullfilled -story
Right Next Door -poem
I Want You -story
Artistic Tart
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In fairness to Buddybear, it did just get revised. I don't think he made the figures up, based on what was there just recently.
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In fairness to Buddybear, it did just get revised. I don't think he made the figures up, based on what was there just recently.


I concur, I've been watching it all month (as well as in previous months) and Buddybear was correct up until today.
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Okay, I can't see how the Febuary story picks can change in a day/week but I'll ask Gav how it works it out.
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Okay, I can't see how the Febuary story picks can change in a day/week but I'll ask Gav how it works it out.


I know how it can change in a week, as my poem was at number six a week ago but moved up to number one as other stories/poems got hit with lower scores and moved down...just waiting to see how long mine stays up there...

I know also there has been some changes in the last few months concerning poems...authors no longer make the Top Author list with a high scoring poem...I believe this happened about four months ago...

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I think if poems want to be treated as equal with stories, then we should go all the way with that. Even love stories that don't have a strong sexual component are deemed to not be suitable for this site, so shouldn't the same standard go for poems? With the creation of storiesspace, we wouldn't even be stifling poets' creativity, since there is a perfectly valid outlet for non-sexual writing there. Plenty of writers have published both here and on storiesspace in both the poems and stories sections, so why not just make that the rule, rather than a somewhat common practice?
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You want to remove love stories as well now? See how this escalates , then it will be another category then another.
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You want to remove love stories as well now? See how this escalates , then it will be another category then another.


I didn't understand the response to be a recommendation to remove Love Stories. Is it not true that if there's supposed to some sexual element to the story, even in the Love Story genre?

Why, for discussion's sake at the very least, should the same not apply to Poetry?
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You want to remove love stories as well now? See how this escalates , then it will be another category then another.


I didn't understand the response to be a recommendation to remove Love Stories. Is it not true that if there's supposed to some sexual element to the story, even in the Love Story genre?

Why, for discussion's sake at the very least, should the same not apply to Poetry?


That's exactly what I was trying to say. I have had a story rejected in the past with the explanation that even love stories must have a sexual component, and yet the poems don't seem to need that. What I was trying to say is keep the poetry category, and yes, the love story category too, but since this is an erotic site, make them have an erotic component. Otherwise they can be posted on the non-erotic version of the site.
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Because them they would be in a poem section not a love poem section. Are you going to police that and moderate that? It's easy to make suggestions without having to be the one responsible to implement the suggestions. I don't want to have to be the person that rejects a beautiful piece of poetry because it doesn't contain any sexual elements. I have in the past rejected poems because they haven't been love poems.
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I don't want to have to be the person that rejects a beautiful piece of poetry because it doesn't contain any sexual elements.


Isn't this essentially one of the current aspects the story verifiers look at with regular stories? It could be the best story ever written, but if it was a love story with no sexual elements it would be deemed not suited for this site, under my understanding of the rules.
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I have had a story rejected in the past with the explanation that even love stories must have a sexual component,


That's interesting, because there was a post some time ago in the forums by Roccotool, who was a moderator at the time stating that love stories do not have to have sex...

I would have to assume that would also be the case for categories like "novels"...I can't imagine every chapter being required to have sex...

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I have had a story rejected in the past with the explanation that even love stories must have a sexual component, and yet the poems don't seem to need that.



This whole thread is silly, seriously. I see that it bugs all of you, and as I said I can easly give my spot away to one of your friends, or as DM said you can give me a 3 bombs (easiest way) My ego have no problems with that what-so-ever and my ego deffinitely doesn't grow when one of my poems is Story Pics of the month. I know exactly how good/bad they are, have no illusions there.

About your story being rejected... When was it, 3 months ago or 3 years ago? Every thing changes, this site and its rulles, as well.

You know what, everything sounds like kindergarten... and screaming kids 'why is B. having more carrots than I have?' Childish.
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Love stories are defined as 'For all you romantics out there, here is our love stories section. These are stories of romance and love, which are generally on a deeper relationship level than stories in other categories. This story category focuses on falling in love, being in love, and developing a loving relationship. Please submit your real life or fictional love stories here'

I don't see anything about them having to contain sex in there. In fact there is nothing in the story submission page that says that sex has to be included in the love story category.
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This whole thread is silly, seriously. I see that it bugs all of you, and as I said I can easly give my spot away to one of your friends, or as DM said you can give me a 3 bombs (easiest way) My ego have no problems with that what-so-ever and my ego deffinitely doesn't grow when one of my poems is Story Pics of the month. I know exactly how good/bad they are, have no illusions there.

You know what, everything sounds like kindergarten... and screaming kids 'why is B. having more carrots than I have?' Childish.


Do you know what? Not every post here is written on behalf of bruised egos. I can't speak for everyone, but to me, it's a discussion about what's best for the site overall.

I'm sorry you find it childish. I disagree.
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Quote by She


This whole thread is silly, seriously. I see that it bugs all of you, and as I said I can easly give my spot away to one of your friends, or as DM said you can give me a 3 bombs (easiest way) My ego have no problems with that what-so-ever and my ego deffinitely doesn't grow when one of my poems is Story Pics of the month. I know exactly how good/bad they are, have no illusions there.

You know what, everything sounds like kindergarten... and screaming kids 'why is B. having more carrots than I have?' Childish.


Do you know what? Not every post here is written on behalf of bruised egos. I can't speak for everyone, but to me, it's a discussion about what's best for the site overall.

I'm sorry you find it childish. I disagree.




hahahahah how do you think to improve something by taking away what is obviously graded as good? Don't get it. Usually you take away something that worth nothing, oh wait, are you guys saying that Poetry is worth nothing?
And usually when you want to improve something you add something good. So bad away, good add, right?
Alpha Blonde
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Nobody is talking about removing poems or throwing them into the basement.

The discussion is about two Top Ten lists or even a 5/5 split within a single Top Ten list.
That way poems and stories have equal standings on this site.

People are becoming overly sensitive to a discussion that is only being aimed at maintaining fair representation for both poets and authors.
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Did I stir up a fire ant nest? Good golly, it seems I did.

If ("IF!") poems and stories were written on a common basis, or judged on a common basis, then my suggestion to separate the scoring (and scoring ONLY) of poems and stories would be bogus.

1. They are not written on a common basis. The stories (almost universally) have a strong sexual and/or erotic content. Poems often don't. They do typically relate to romance, foreplay, anticipation of heavy breathing soon to take place. But how in heck can you even compare... say... Dancing_Doll's "Stacey's Confession" with Top_This' "A Different Place"? They are both outstanding in their own right. But they are such different genres that you have no common basis for comparing them. Which one is the best "story"? Surely the former, because the latter is not technically a "story" at all. Perhaps a vignette of a scene out of a story.

2. They are not judged on a common basis. I seem to notice that when a poem is even moderately good, it gets 5's straight up. But even the very best written (or the most erotic) stories often get 3-bombed enough so that they drop off the Best 10 chart. Readers expect a story to turn them on to some degree. If it doesn't, WHAM, a 3. Poems are not judged that way. I had one of my best scoring stories, given a 3 and a rambling comment on how the sexual relationship wasn't "logical" and was only "make-believe". Godfrey Daniel! ALL my stories are make-believe! But you NEVER see poems 3-bombed and commented that the plausibility of the metaphor between a mud geyser and male ejaculation was tarnished by the choice of Trochaic rhythm scheme and the lack of rhyming. Sweet Mother of Pearl!

So poems collect nearly all 5's and even the best stories rarely manage to avoid 3-bombs. It's not an even playing field.
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Excellent post. Well said. =d>
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Nobody is talking about removing poems or throwing them into the basement.

The discussion is about two Top Ten lists or even a 5/5 split within a single Top Ten list.
That way poems and stories have equal standings on this site.

People are becoming overly sensitive to a discussion that is only being aimed at maintaining fair representation for both poets and authors.



I just don't get it why it bugs all of you so much, as I said and strongly believe it, it is just a faze when people are reading poetry more.

Nobody seems to be complaining when there was not even one poem between Story Pics, be patiane, it will past, LOL

And if you mean with, people becoming overy sensitive, me.. I can assure you that I am not sensitive nor took this whole thing personaly.