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Just a little something I wrote to my future love whoever she may be don't know yet but know she is out there somewhere smile

I have something I want to give to you but promise me?
Please promise to keep it safe don't hurt it has been hurt before
promise me?

This gift I have to give is tender and precious
Does not want to be hurt again only loved
So before I give you this most precious of gifts
will you make a promise to me to care for it
keep it from hurting and from pain?
Promise me?

I know you are wondering what this gift I have to
offer to you is...
This gift is my heart and my love
Will you promise me to keep it safe from hurt again?
Promise me?
“I'm not one of those complicated, mixed-up cats. I'm not looking for the secret to life.... I just go on from day to day, taking what comes.”~Frank Sinatra~
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I corrected this line for you Jim:

This give I have to give is tender and precious.

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I corrected this line for you Jim:

This give I have to give is tender and precious.




Thanks I forgot to fix it here saw it last night just as I posted it thanks again for catching it
“I'm not one of those complicated, mixed-up cats. I'm not looking for the secret to life.... I just go on from day to day, taking what comes.”~Frank Sinatra~
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Quote by nicola
I corrected this line for you Jim:

This give I have to give is tender and precious.



Just a quick note...Lisa has been great over on Stories Space as far as catching errors and correcting them for people...

She almost makes my stuff look decent...

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Beautiful Jim. She is out there. You will find someone right for you.
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It was very beautiful Jim....and you will find your special one...this and th epoem I read yesterday that you posted should catch the eye of a few ladies and give them a look into your very caring heart heart....great job and your poems have gooten so much better too...keep wtiting them and sharing them please
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Very honest and vulnerable, Nice job!