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Please forgive any mistakes, im not much of a poet and im not quite sure how these should write but heres one from my heart.
There have been ups to the point of my heart bursting with love, There have been downs so bad I never thought I'd survive.
The scales never did balance The tears were always mine But look how far we have come, It seems were doing fine.
From the worst time in my life to the most hopeful I've ever felt, You've dragged me through every emotion then kissed it better 'till my heart would melt.
So here's to the new year a new us, me, you, life.
A fresh start A new way We will put the past behind us and look forward to each new day.
Here's to the new year
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keep listening to your heart, it reads well from here.
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Joined: 7/20/2009 Posts: 210 Location: Rivendell
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Thank you very much
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That's really beautiful , both in thought and poetically . Maybe you already have a collection or book of your poems . I look forward to reading more .
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