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Posted: Saturday, September 04, 2010 2:12:27 AM

Rank: Advanced Wordsmith

Joined: 5/29/2010
Posts: 71
Location: Running all over, United States
Rattling inside my brain
All the thoughts getting loose
Shiver, shudder, causing pain
The war raging without truce

Fight and flash and fall
Rip open our defense
Burning, breaking, destroying all
Moving on, leading suspense

Bleeding out concern
The soldiers running free
Letting go is what we yearn
Though not what we foresee

Listen to your heart's call
Hear what it demands
They're not meek or small
Think and the brain understands

Just give in a little bit
Enough to feel complete
Need to live without the split
Living happily without defeat

Dare to get poisoned? Then try kissing me...
Posted: Tuesday, September 07, 2010 6:39:56 PM

Rank: Wild at Heart

Joined: 4/3/2010
Posts: 8,309
Location: California
You did a very good job expressing what many of us are feeling.

Posted: Wednesday, September 08, 2010 2:47:02 PM

Rank: Lurker

Joined: 12/1/2006
Posts: 918,651
Wow...that was extrmely good dear. Keep up the great work. Will Love to read more....
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